Odyssey: C7
Okay, here is my next piece. I think it is really bad, but I will have to worry about it later and come back to it then..
The hand is okay, and the brain coral, but the jellyfish looks super off/weird. I think I got the "essence", but I don't think this piece is near good enough to be in my final portfolio.. But only I have the power to change that!!
Perhaps I can trace the hand and then work on a different technique for the jellyfish on a new piece.. Then we can figure out a better background, because really the hand being stung is the highlight here. But really I'm not sure if this is the conflict I want for my concentration. If I'm going to stick with jellyfish, I want to really capture the essence of the nature of a jellyfish. It has to be obvious, but subtle and still clearly a jellyfish. Watercolors should be the best for that but perhaps it's the way I wrapped it around the hand that throws it all off.. Also, the craftsmanship could be way better with outlining the hand.. The whole thing is just poorly done and overall looks rushed.
The reef is supposed to look kind of bare, but I never looked at it far away so it doesn't look rocky it just looks weird, and the sea urchin really just ruins any chance of it looking realistic. The funny thing is that it looks like I intentionally put a blurry filter on the reef to make it all fuzzy and blurred.. strange.. I don't want my concentration to look hyper-realistic, but perhaps part of it could be that it looks more realistic as it progresses?? Anyway, here it is...
